my first time… critique?

[imaginarywings_]

did my first engagement shoot and was really excited about it(:
i just hope people like them as much as i do

some critique would be very much appreciated!
please and thank you
<3

http://s154.photobucket.com/user/JBrockerchick/media/8577126847_d29b5db654_z_zps50b6d811.jpg.html

http://s154.photobucket.com/user/JBrockerchick/media/8578252004_248e97bfdd_z_zps9fa92751.jpg.html

http://s154.photobucket.com/user/JBrockerchick/media/8577128741_f44e2b0841_z_zps091ac4c5.jpg.html

http://s154.photobucket.com/user/JBrockerchick/media/8578229428_56ed050249_z_zps35fde7f1.jpg.html

 

 

[Thomas]

is there some way to make them bigger, its hard for people to critique thumbnail sized images.

[cameraclicker]

I thought I provided a comment the first time you put up these photos, but I see there is nothing there, so perhaps old age is catching up to me.

I think the photography is pretty good. You handled the dynamic range quite well, I see detail in his white shirt and her black dress.  The girl has a couple of specs on her face, if they are moles, perhaps they could be lightened.  If they are blemishes, I would have removed them.  I find them distracting.  Consider his hand on her arm instead of her hip.  It reduces the impact of her arm if it is covered.

Quite good.  Keep shooting.

[imaginarywings_]

@TJH091085

thumbnails? that’s really odd.. i see them really big on my computer when i click on the link…
i’m not sure how to change that):

@cameraclicker

thank you very much for looking through them haha
yeah, i wasn’t too sure what to do with all her moles
i didn’t want to get rid of them.. but i’ll try and lighten them next time around
<3

 

[Thomas]

thats weird then, its literally just bigger than a thumbnail size on here,im using a tablet but never any issues before. never mind, sorry I cant help lol

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