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  • April 13, 2013 at 4:27 pm #8889
    Addictedpeach
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    I don’t get paid and this is my daughter..poor thing 🙂

     

    https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=3900412968926&set=pb.1837241859.-2207520000.1365884830&type=3&theater

    April 13, 2013 at 5:13 pm #8891
    nairbynairb
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    Content unavailable. 😛

    April 13, 2013 at 8:00 pm #8895
    Addictedpeach
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    http://500px.com/photo/30325425

    Sorry…

    April 13, 2013 at 8:41 pm #8896
    cameraclicker
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    It is a nice photo.  Presently it has a score of 52.6.  There are some picky things:  the top of her head blends into the background and her skin is over exposed a little.  If it was shot to a raw file, I would reprocess it to bring her skin down a bit and add some fill to get the top of her head back.   Probably I would process it a couple of times to different layers so her hair could be a little lighter and her skin could be darker without changing the background.

    April 13, 2013 at 9:20 pm #8898
    creyes8519
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    I agree with cameraclicker… the processing needs to be better, but otherwise the shot would have been fantastic.

    April 13, 2013 at 9:40 pm #8903
    Addictedpeach
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    Thank you guys 🙂

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