He needs to stop screwing with the vibrance slider. Otherwise, it’s not too bad.
Jeninpa76!!! THOSE ARE MY PHOTOS!!….. Just kidding. Wow, holy color balance Batman. If my kid’s graduation pics came back like that I’d dropkick that photographer’s cybershot into a lake.
I see nothing bad or awful, it’s all well composed, in focus, and there aren’t any weird or corny PS tricks. I’d criticize my own work before yours 🙂