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nairbynairbParticipant
Based on those pictures alone? I probably wouldn’t charge people for those.
You have focus issues, colour issues, and composition issues.
The only picture I really like of them all is the one with the girl laying on the branch. (and maybe the toddler on the bridge, for the colour and expression – not the composition)
The baby in the mirror has weird colour, making the baby look like she has jaundice.
In no way do I mean you should stop taking photos… just don’t charge yet. I don’t think you’re where you need to be to be selling your product.nairbynairbParticipantnairbynairbParticipantI was going to say all of the same things as OctoberMoon, but now I don’t have to.
You seem to enjoy taking photos so do not let this discourage you. If you take all of this constructive criticism and apply it to better your photography, I think you’ll do well!
February 20, 2013 at 4:07 pm in reply to: I would like some opinions on my website &/or photos #6929nairbynairbParticipantI think that you need a more defining banner/logo. It’s just kind of ‘meh’. Otherwise, it looks good!
February 13, 2013 at 5:43 pm in reply to: I am NOT a (especially portrait) photographer, but would still like some C/C #6603nairbynairbParticipantFor me, I can’t stand landscape photography when the horizons aren’t level.
A lot of your photos don’t have a level horizon.
http://sphotos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/323120_963229056024_278639188_o.jpg
Pictures like this, obviously because it’s a hill, you wouldn’t want to have it level.
http://sphotos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/338773_963229949234_1308517443_o.jpg
My favourite picture of the albums you posted:
http://sphotos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/33925_639779252024_7727323_n.jpg
You definitely have an eye for seeing what’s interesting, you just don’t have a unique-ness about your images. Keep shooting!
nairbynairbParticipantI’m not a fan of pictures #2 and #3. The center picture should be one of your stronger images. The way you have them framed too seems like you squished the images, even if you haven’t.
If I were you I’d have the last image as your center image for sure.
nairbynairbParticipantBarrie, Ontario, Canada here!
nairbynairbParticipantIHF and cameraclicker said what I was going to say… except: Get off those train tracks! Not only is it dangerous, but it’s extremely cliché
nairbynairbParticipantI looked through every picture and was blown away from the majority of them. Good work, sir!
nairbynairbParticipantThe only ones that I find are actually bad is the one with the kids in their wetsuits, and the couple kissing with the lady in fetal position. Other than that, he has some awesome shots!
nairbynairbParticipantThat first link won’t work.
The second one is horrid!nairbynairbParticipantApparently this image won a contest? O_o
nairbynairbParticipantYou made it worse by posting here! A simple Google search of your username (Adele Pardy) just shows us all of your work!
nairbynairbParticipantOh. My. God.
This needs to be on YANAP!!!nairbynairbParticipantYou have some really nice shots in there! You seem to enjoy what you do, so keep doing it!
Pictures I like:
If this one had a bittttt sharper focus it would be amazing, love the composition:
(upon looking at it larger I realize that it is in focus, it’s just the overall sharpness that brings it down)
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