Not long ago i was up on this website getting bashed SUCK IT!! =)

[JanJan]

do you like this one

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=542317565821890&set=a.404254802961501.98058.229987970388186&type=1&permPage=1

Although the posing a bit awkward, this is MUCH better than your other shots. Keep on shooting!

[amber]

Thank you!!!!! And no those bridals were from this past June and i use to do the tilt but yes that is something ive learned to try my hardest not to do unless its to make the guy seem taller/shorter. how are these? I sometime feel like a dead carcass  being picked apart by buzzards on this site lol but I enjoy making improvements! I hope I can put everyone’s thought, opinions and advice into my work daily. any improvement since last weeks ocl?

 

natural light

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=572482792805367&set=a.404254802961501.98058.229987970388186&type=1&theater

 

ocl

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=572487006138279&set=a.404254802961501.98058.229987970388186&type=1&theater

 

ocl

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=572490769471236&set=a.404254802961501.98058.229987970388186&type=1&theater

 

ocl

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=572541042799542&set=a.404254802961501.98058.229987970388186&type=1&theater

[cameraclicker]

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=572482792805367&set=a.404254802961501.98058.229987970388186&type=1&theater

Try cloning out the twigs poking the back of her head.

 

https://scontent-a-ord.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-frc3/q75/s720x720/1468674_572490769471236_1940757210_n.jpg

Of the three, I think this is my favourite, though I can’t think of a reason for the pose.  What caused the apparition above her left shoulder?   Her arms seem to have more tan than her face and body.  The left side of her face is slightly too bright.  Try opening up the shadows a little.  All of these things are pretty picky!

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=572541042799542&set=a.404254802961501.98058.229987970388186&type=1&theater

This is a pretty good environmental portrait.  I gather it is on a walkway over a road and the fencing is to keep things from being thrown from the bridge.  Amy’s comment was earned.

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=572487006138279&set=a.404254802961501.98058.229987970388186&type=1&theater

Cute little chick, big bum.  I think this is weakest of the bunch.  Lighting is pretty good though.  Light could have been placed a bit further from her, but I don’t know if that would be possible in that location.

Doing well.  Keep shooting.

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