I would like a bit more depth of field on the first one, “prayer”. Possibly a bit more depth of field on “…So Help Me God”. Otherwise I think it was a really good effort. I think we read that book in grade 9, or 10, I forget, and I don’t remember most of the story, except stepping on glasses and shooting a dog. And, something about a Halloween costume that had some chicken wire in it, that was marked by a knife. One day I’ll have to track down a copy and read it again.
I think you have good focus and caught good expression.