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sarah5string
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I really like this natural lighting of this one. Also the stripes in her jumper and in the reflections really make it interesting and draws me in. The only things that let it down are the focus not being totally sharp and the fact she’s got her phone in her hand! Unless the phone is on purpose? If so it needs to be made more obvious as otherwise it makes it look more like a snapshot of someone on their lunch break 😉

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