Reply To: Quess It's My Turn

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http://www.flickr.com/photos/73875730@N08/7779903570/

You can see not only her bra strap but the strap for hanging the dress is showing big time on the other shoulder.  You need to pay attention to the little details.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/73875730@N08/7763555838/

Second shot (middle) would never had made it off my camera, let a lone onto my business page (if I had one) she looks like she has to pee.  The third shot (last) is also another image that would have made it’s way in the trash bin, it doesn’t show the model off in a postitive light at all. 

http://www.flickr.com/photos/73875730@N08/7764078410/

You cropped her right at the knees, her facial expression is a little strange, another shot that should have been trashed.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/73875730@N08/7041516377/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/73875730@N08/7041086237/

holy underexposed batman…. also in the second one nice crop right at the knee.

oh yes the lay on the bench and look sexy shot:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/73875730@N08/6894990168/

This would have been a wonderful image if not for the cropping.

So yes, you are no further a head in your photography journey than I am.  I could have taken these shots, I would have nailed my focus as well.  Difference between my small sample of stuff and yours… mine are about if I move my light here, how does it change the look of the image, if I add a reflector here, what happens.  You are trying to build a portfolio, I’m trying to experiment and learn.  No one in my shots are dressed up, mine are about learning the techincal parts of photography, your’s are about building up your ego and self worth.