Reply To: Pretty pleased with some pictures I took yesterday! Outsider opinions?

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Good use of DoF in the first pic but it could use something a little more interesting as the centre on attention. The pic of your sister is great! I didn’t zoom in so the focus looked fine to me. The light painting looks cool but without being able to see the face it suffers from the same problem as the first pic.

Good technique in all the shots.