If you want honesty I’d have to say you are border line…. sorry!
You work is mostly okay but there is no WOW factor. You do have a few faux traits,
wrong focus point
wrong colour temp
There’s lots more I could point out but honestly there has never been a picture that couldn’t be ripped apart in critique or improved with hindsight. So I’d like to ask is this your only advertising page or do you have a website as well? Because this page looks more like a collection of everything you have ever taken rather than an advert.
Only post your best work online, not everything you take!
If you were to weed these down to the best 20 images you’d have a much better looking page.
Hope that helps…….