I’m not a fan of selective color, especially the eyes of a child.
You’ve chopped off hands, feet, foreheads, arms, & necks.
B&W? Not feeling the mood there.
You need to practice composition.
You need to practice the interplay between light AND shadow.
You say you’re seeing the light, but you’re not applying it.
Pet Peeve: every noobie asiking for critique says the same thing – “I don’t charge, and I know I need way more practice.” Then they have watermarks on their photos…? And, what’s the meaning of ‘imperfectly imaginable photography’? I mean, I had to think about that for 2 minutes or so to finally conclude there’s no link between that name and any of the photos on youpic, except to you alone..