Reply To: okay, deep breath.

[nesgran]

Don’t bother manually focussing with a crop camera, especially not without the high precision focus screen which I’m not even sure the 60D can use. You will never do a better job than the camera unless in certain circumstances.

If you haven’t get yourself a monitor calibrator device to sort out your wacky colours. Also look at what the screen is, if it is a consumer grade screen with a TN panel you need something better if you are going to be charging people for your services. The wedding pictures have wildly varied colour temp and balance.

Most of your shots have that 80’s soft focus look, are you using the old canon 135 f2.8 soft focus lens? Anyway, it looks pretty bad.

You have a fair few problems to sort out before you should take on any more paying clients. All of these issues should have been apparent to yourself before you asked for a critique.