I would suggest not charging for now… you’re asking for help and critique which shows you understand you have shortcomings and are willing to work towards improving.
I’ll reiterate what others have said. Most photos are very underexposed and orange/red. To some degree you can fix that in editing, but you should work on getting it right in-camera. The focus issues too. Learn how to set your preferred AF point and use autofocus. Always focus on the subject’s eye. I never use manual focus unless it’s for some close-up still life and occasionally for other things but not generally for portraits. If you’re doing weddings you’ll need a camera that can handle low-light situations well and a fast lens.