#16 (the little girl) would be a winner had you focused on her EYE instead of her hair.
What’s with the on camera (or worse yet popup) flash?! You’re kidding, right? Harsh shadows are just that… harsh. Get the flash OFF CAMERA … create some drama.
Ummm, a bridge, couple buildings, view from the hotel room… not feeling it.
Nothing to say.
To me, these look like your practice shots. Let’s check out the lighting here, focus there, and aperture the other. Nothing screams of “Man, that’s a good shot, let me capture it before it gets away.”