Hey OP – After reading through this topic it’s clear thar there has been improvement from what was there before. Kudos to your for taking the advice on board :o)
I didn’t go through all of your work but I went straight to your website link. My only criticism is the watermarking.
This —> http://www.lilyanddaisyphoto.com/children/h519bdb52#h519bdb52
There is a large copyright logo debossed into the photo and also the company logo watermark. It detracts from the images a lot. If there really has to be a watermark then why not pick just one and try to stick with it.
My 2 pence and I’m sure you will understand that I’m not picking on you, just offering an alternative.