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ebi
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The first three shots of Lia jane are gorgeous.I think Don’t like the color on the 4th. Love Blue eyes as well. Don’t really care for the football shots. although the girl would be more interesting if it were more apparent she was a girl – helmet off, pulled back. Don’t be afraid to get wider shots. The close ups can be nice but you need more atmosphere. Like princess Mary Kate Olsen could be more interesting as a wider shot. But it’s kind of messy as a tight shot. Reber would be ok if it weren’t for whatever the white circular thing is behind her.

Classy and relaxed are kind of too tight too but they are very cute. Keep it up!