Reply To: Let me have it.

[stef]

Your best lighting and posing is on the black man, and even then the wrap on his face was a bit hot. The others largely look contrived or poorly exposed. Post processing and lighting technique, as said above, need work.

 

Your single light images would’ve really benefitted from a reflector and proper exposure.

 

You might calibrate your monitor to verify it’s not set too bright.