Weirdly – I think the woman laughing is the best shot. It’s well framed and shows a really natural moment. Much better than the harsh B/W which follows. The shot of her in the corner is too warm in colour and the window is to close to her head making it distracting.
I like the first wedding shot but agree that the second one is too far away, also the flare doesn’t enhance this shot. Plus remove the golf flags and red poles.the factory at night and the trees are a bit meh, like the waterfall and the hands holding the camera. Hate the kids shots, badly framed and not very sharp, they look like snap shots.