I honestly wouldn’t mind becoming a product photographer.
It’s not something you can just become overnight. Every company now has a website that needs pics and every company has employees with cameras who think they are photographers. These days the only commercial work we get is either so boring that no one would want to do it, or the product is impossible to photograph!
As for the car, yes that’s better. as Findley says it’s needs a better crop.And my idea of shooting lower down would improve it more.
However, I’m UK based and a car nut, so it may be just that I’ve never seen that car before, if there were a dozen parked on my street I would say it was dull.