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JLiuFirst off…let me help you out by breaking down the blob into 4 links:
https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-NE6YbfI9vI0/UBHXhVT1z6I/AAAAAAAABvQ/D41Q7o6AWUA/w262-h429/1234+040.JPG
https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-6uVyB_Go08A/UWy54HwEteI/AAAAAAAACkw/xGaHfBcfOLU/w287-h429/030.JPG
https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-5vGFxI_N-hs/UWtuYlP7b_I/AAAAAAAACcY/4y5xQJCO42w/w641-h429/223.JPG
The shots are mostly technically sound (lighting, sharpness, etc.) but the compositions need some work – especially the one of the girl in the alley. Too much of the distracting background is in focus, taking away from the subject of the shot. Also, be careful of cropping out body parts – you should never crop out directly at any joints or leave out parts of the hands/feet.
I’m sure others will chime in with a more discerning eye.