I think that you show promise.
When I was first starting out I just bought a white 99 cent white board for a reflector and it worked awesome until I got a real one. I know how to use pro lighting, but you can really do a lot with a 5 in 1 reflector.
Picking times of the day where the light is nice will help too. One hour before the sun sets is always great.
There seems to be some focus issues here and there, so just pay attention to that, I always try and focus directly on the eyes.