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ebi
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http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252481125/ – not interesting enough.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252481235/in/photostream/ – crooked horizons are not recommended for most things.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252385034/in/photostream/ – I took an iphone photo of a jellyfish the other day that turned out better than this

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252585643/in/photostream/lightbox/ – hmmmm…well i love sushi, but this doesn’t make me want to eat it. you’ve got a crinkled background that is distracting. It’s a very deep green that contrasts way too much with the food.It’s also kicking back into the wood and creating a cast on it. It’s crooked and way too wide. It’s not a great angle. The wood block is chipped. Also not a great color of wood for shooting. Also badly styled. Not your fault, but that’s what you get at generic sushi restaurants.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252477156/in/photostream/ – light painting is so very 1992. Funny story, I used to work for a guy who claimed to have invented light painting in the 90’s, even though it’s been around forever.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252385634/in/photostream/ – no not interesting.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252482775/in/photostream/ – a little interesting. would be better if it enjoyed a little more symmetry.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252586733/in/photostream/ – not even really sure what i’m looking at.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252478276/in/photostream/ – same

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252386874/in/photostream/ – pretty sunset, dirty beach.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252479276/in/photostream/ – snapshot

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252484585/in/photostream/ why the long crop? It’s ok, but not really interesting.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252484585/in/photostream/ – not really interesting

http://www.flickr.com/photos/105269791@N02/10252289363/in/photostream/ too shallow and I wouldn’t know what I was looking at if I hadn’t seen the other image.

So it looks like your playing, which is fine. You need to figure out what you want to shoot and work on that. Be more specific. You are all over the place. Technically, you seem ok, you just need to figure out how to not be boring.