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[nesgran]

1) get a real email address like sam@shortlistphoto.com. This can be done through gmail and won’t cost anything but will look far more professional.

2) a more orthodox photo would probably make sense, you know with your whole face in it 🙂

3)  write about what kind of photos and/or video that you can produce, whether you have a studio available etc.

4) the visual media sentence is a bit odd as you have media in there twice, maybe rephrase the end to social networks rather than social media?