Tryig to be constructive here . . . . .
I see 4 things.
1. Colors. Did you intend the yellow cast? Gives baby a jaundiced look . . . .
2. Some of the highlights are a little blown out.
3. Can you clean up the drool on the chin?
4. The blade of grass cutting through baby’s face is a little distracting.
I otherwise like the composition –
