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jetpix
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Tryig to be constructive here . . . . .

I see 4 things.

1.  Colors.  Did you intend the yellow cast?  Gives baby a jaundiced look . . . .

2.  Some of the highlights are a little blown out.

3.  Can you clean up the drool on the chin?

4.  The blade of grass cutting through baby’s face is a little distracting.

I otherwise like the composition –