I sure hope these poor women aren’t getting charged for this. You have a loooooong way to go before you are able to do shoots like this successfully. YUCK! Horrible!
try working on more traditional portraiture for now, until your skills are up to par. Shooting sexy photographs that flatter instead of exploit, takes a lot of skill that you don’t yet have.
have you ever seen this page? http://meanphotographers.tumblr.com/
thats what your work reminds me of. I think you should have posted in “am I a Fautographer?” Instead of this thread