And you’ve got some colour problems, look at the first two shots next to each other. One is almost correct but the other is bright red by comparison. Same with the last three. They are all young girls with similar skin tones but put next to each other and they look like they are from different planets.
I like the shot of the two girls in the car but the black background is to dominant in the picture and looks cut out.
This girl looks cute
but she’s scary looking here.