It’s a very awkward and unflattering pose for both of them.
you cut her feet off in an odd place. I don’t like the guy version either but at least you made a better decision on crop on that one.
You need to decide which is better: Color or B&W? Then go with the one you choose. Not both.
Overall everything is very clean and pretty. It’s good photography, not great. I would suggest moving around more with your subjects. and try not to pose them or put them in posey situations too much. Stuff like this is much more interesting and unique: https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=533761176690568&set=pb.147629415303748.-2207520000.1381779729.&type=3&theater
Also your watermark is annoying.