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ebi
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there isn’t really anything interesting to see here. Part of what you need to do is focus on something. There are all these kind of senior portrait setups mixed in with not very interesting element shots that don’t really go with anything else. Like the beginning feels like your trying to tell a beach story and then we abruptly move into some random portraits of a girl. Then baby then surfer then another girl.

I think you may have some potential with the first 5 images. I’d revisit that with another shoot. Start with the most interesting image in that entire set…this one: http://www.flickr.com/photos/96671646@N04/9670633205/