I read the first critique before looking at the pics and started out thinking ” these will be awful” but actually I really like a lot of them.
Like most people who post here, you have too many okay/meh shots between the good ones. 5 great shots are better than 20 average ones! Cull your portfolio.
Everything mentioned above is true and fair.
The only other thing I noticed was with this shot..
There’s some thing weird going on with her right hand, it looks like it’s been desaturated? 10 secs in PS would fix it.