Reply To: 18 year-old photographer looking for any and all feedback!

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Here is another edit.  This is the original:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/54048679@N07/10968792965/

And, this is the edited version:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/54048679@N07/10968985394/

Click on an image here, then in Flickr, jump back and forth a few times between original and edited.  Where does your eye go in each version?  Where do you want your viewer’s eye to go as soon as they look at your picture?

By the way, her pose is awkward.  It makes her left arm look deformed.  I’m pretty sure it is not, but the translation from a 3D girl to a 2D image did not work.  If you are going to have her bend like that, she should also angle her hips and shoulders toward the camera.